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    Carrieberrie is offline Elder Cauldron Living Member
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    Default My Life

    My life seems to fade away ~
    Where exactly - I cannot say.
    It leaves me……
    Empty, cold, and alone -
    A feeling that I have once known.

    My life has gone a stray -
    If I linger too long
    I may fade away……..
    Away from myself,
    Away from who I am
    Away from what I have become.

    My life has taken a darker note -
    Sunshine seems to no longer have a vote.
    I live inside myself,
    Away from others -
    Always remote.

    What has happened to me?
    Why do I not wish to be happy?
    Sadly, I know not -
    For sorrow is all that
    I have wrought.

    Darkness fills me all around…………..
    In the darkness I rebound.
    I live in a place
    That, unfortunately, no one can be -
    I live in a place
    That I cannot break free.

    My life has turned into
    Nothing more than a joke ~
    My life has become
    My personal hoax.

    I thought that I was
    ‘Meant to do something, be something’
    But I finally realize ~
    My life just doesn’t have
    Any meaning any more…………
    ©CB717 2007

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    davedoom51 is offline Contributing Cauldron Living Member
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    Default Re: My Life

    I really ....really ....really enjoyed your poem!!!! I am gonna message you a new one I wrote A lil departure for me---give me your opinion???

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    Carrieberrie is offline Elder Cauldron Living Member
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    Default Re: My Life

    Thanks Dave! You know me, always full of 'happiness and cheer' in my poems [wink]

    I think that you should post the one that you sent me - it is great!!

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    LordDuke is offline Elder Cauldron Living Member
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    Default Re: My Life

    I do like this one.

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    Carrieberrie is offline Elder Cauldron Living Member
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    Default Re: My Life

    Thank you, LD.

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