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06-24-2007, 04:44 AM #1
My Life
My life seems to fade away ~
Where exactly - I cannot say.
It leaves me……
Empty, cold, and alone -
A feeling that I have once known.
My life has gone a stray -
If I linger too long
I may fade away……..
Away from myself,
Away from who I am
Away from what I have become.
My life has taken a darker note -
Sunshine seems to no longer have a vote.
I live inside myself,
Away from others -
Always remote.
What has happened to me?
Why do I not wish to be happy?
Sadly, I know not -
For sorrow is all that
I have wrought.
Darkness fills me all around…………..
In the darkness I rebound.
I live in a place
That, unfortunately, no one can be -
I live in a place
That I cannot break free.
My life has turned into
Nothing more than a joke ~
My life has become
My personal hoax.
I thought that I was
‘Meant to do something, be something’
But I finally realize ~
My life just doesn’t have
Any meaning any more…………
©CB717 2007
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06-26-2007, 02:27 AM #2
Re: My Life
I really ....really ....really enjoyed your poem!!!! I am gonna message you a new one I wrote A lil departure for me---give me your opinion???
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06-26-2007, 06:41 PM #3
Re: My Life
Thanks Dave! You know me, always full of 'happiness and cheer' in my poems [wink]
I think that you should post the one that you sent me - it is great!!
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07-26-2008, 12:39 PM #4
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Re: My Life
I do like this one.
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07-28-2008, 07:33 AM #5
Re: My Life
Thank you, LD.

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