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    Carrieberrie is offline Elder Cauldron Living Member
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    Default I am the one ~

    I am the one
    Who you once held dear
    I am the one that is no longer near

    I am the one
    Who used to hold you tight
    I am the one
    Who is no longer given that right

    I am the one
    Who once looked into your eyes so blue
    I am the one
    Who no longer has a clue

    I am the one
    Who once wiped away your tears
    I am the one
    Who still has fears

    I am the one
    Who once knew you so well
    I am the one
    Who now lives in hell

    I am the one
    Who once loved you so
    I am the one
    That had to let you go

    I am the one
    Who used to cry for you in the night
    I am the one
    Who finally saw you in the light

    I am the one
    Who must let you be
    I am the one
    That has set YOU free

    I am the one
    That has remained strong
    While you are the one
    That has always done me wrong

    I am the one
    Who had to let go
    I am the one
    You no longer must know.

    I am the one
    (c) 2007 CB717

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    Carrieberrie wrote:
    I am the one
    Who you once held dear
    I am the one that is no longer near

    I am the one
    Who used to hold you tight
    I am the one
    Who is no longer given that right

    I am the one
    Who once looked into your eyes so blue
    I am the one
    Who no longer has a clue

    I am the one
    Who once wiped away your tears
    I am the one
    Who still has fears

    I am the one
    Who once knew you so well
    I am the one
    Who now lives in hell

    I am the one
    Who once loved you so
    I am the one
    That had to let you go

    I am the one
    Who used to cry for you in the night
    I am the one
    Who finally saw you in the light

    I am the one
    Who must let you be
    I am the one
    That has set YOU free

    I am the one
    That has remained strong
    While you are the one
    That has always done me wrong

    I am the one
    Who had to let go
    I am the one
    You no longer must know.

    I am the one
    (c) 2007 Â*CB717
    I likes it!!!! Â*Is a sad but positive piece Â*Thank You for sharing! Â*(And you are definitely "The One")

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    Default Re: I am the one ~

    Carrie....we all have been there....very full of feeling! good work [cool]

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    Default Re: I am the one ~

    Glad you liked it, Dave.

    Thanks for understanding, Fate[smile]

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    Default Re: I am the one ~

    Carrieberrie is love this. [smile] Like Fate said we've all been there and you so said it all so nicely!!

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    Default Re: I am the one ~

    CarrieBerrie, that was really lovely.

    (I started to say that I now needed to throw a few darts at my ex's picture, but that's won't be good for my karma. Â*So instead I'm going to go call my hubby and tell him how much I love him and how fantastically divine the universe is to have brought us together 19 years ago, even though some of the trip was less than pleasant.)

    It will get better, in fact it will get amazing! Â*

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    Carrieberrie is offline Elder Cauldron Living Member
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    Deda wrote:
    CarrieBerrie, that was really lovely.

    (I started to say that I now needed to throw a few darts at my ex's picture, but that's won't be good for my karma. Â*So instead I'm going to go call my hubby and tell him how much I love him and how fantastically divine the universe is to have brought us together 19 years ago, even though some of the trip was less than pleasant.)

    It will get better, in fact it will get amazing! Â*
    Deda, ironically enough, this poem is about my ex-husband. I'm about to marry someone who loves me as much as I love him, but I had to let the past 'go' first. Even tho' me and my ex have been divorced for six years, I didn't realize that I had still been holding on to a little piece of him. It was time to let him 'go'........

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    Default Re: I am the one ~


    Carrieberrie wrote:
    I am the one
    Who you once held dear
    I am the one that is no longer near

    I am the one
    Who used to hold you tight
    I am the one
    Who is no longer given that right

    I am the one
    Who once looked into your eyes so blue
    I am the one
    Who no longer has a clue

    I am the one
    Who once wiped away your tears
    I am the one
    Who still has fears

    I am the one
    Who once knew you so well
    I am the one
    Who now lives in hell

    I am the one
    Who once loved you so
    I am the one
    That had to let you go

    I am the one
    Who used to cry for you in the night
    I am the one
    Who finally saw you in the light

    I am the one
    Who must let you be
    I am the one
    That has set YOU free

    I am the one
    That has remained strong
    While you are the one
    That has always done me wrong

    I am the one
    Who had to let go
    I am the one
    You no longer must know.

    I am the one
    (c) 2007 CB717
    this is good as well,you should put them in a book .you are talented.

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