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    LaLuna17 is offline Contributing Cauldron Living Member
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    Default Spring and Summer's Promise

    This is a poem dedicated to my Boyfriend David...I wrote this after I read a few of Pablo Neruda's Love Sonnets.

    Your hands are glazed, love

    What's wrong?

    Your heart sounds as a boxed drum

    The box being you, the box being the gift of my heart; my revival.

    Seasons have come and gone, my vibrant revival not ever of the waning.

    My tears are the snow; the frosty of the frosty; they do not exsist

    The blooms of spring evident on your lips; full bloom at last!

    The Summer sun is always in your bluebird eye

    The green leaves of Spring and Summer give in to Autumn; I do not, Spring and Summer always on my pale, rosy tounge.


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    wiccanwonderer77 is offline Elder Cauldron Living Member
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    Your boyfriend is very lucky to have you. Beautiful poem[smile]

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    Moondancer is offline Elder Cauldron Living Member
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    Default Re: Spring and Summer's Promise

    Talent, sheer talent.

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    LaLuna17 is offline Contributing Cauldron Living Member
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    Default Re: Spring and Summer's Promise

    thank you for your kind comments!

    BB!

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